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I know it probably doesn't but I wanted to shred something apart XD

*Screeches like a crazed fangirl* OMG YUSSSSSS

Well, In the first few lines I'm referring too young men whom want to follow in the footsteps of others and join the army. It may be too blunt but ...

I understand where your getting at. Frankly my grammar needs loads of work, and I will try to fix all the mistakes in here. When I wrote this I was ...

Thankyou for your time, :D Will do.

Thank you :D

It took me like 5 minutes to come up with a reply to this story. I loved it, like most of your work. It had me wondering, and even blushing ...

I don't think he/she meant to make men sound that way...you can't just look at the first line and assume it. You need too look deeper to see the real ...

Amazing...and beautiful! Very inspirational, with a dedicated point of interest. Gives a very strong message too. No matter what the other people say about it, I love it! I'm a ...

LOL brilliant!

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Hey there, Scarlet here to review! This was truly beautiful but before I list the pro's I have to go over the cons... - There is a big run on ...

Lol, hilarious.

Why thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. ^-^

Alright, sorry If I offended you by saying that. I was only stating my utmost opinion.

I'm glad someone likes this poem! Most people criticized this as being not very realistic or true or too harsh on humanity, ect. You have great taste!