ScarletDreams14

I'm going to be honest. I didn't really like it. Please don't take offense! I will give you some advice in hopes that it helps. I've read my fair-share of ...

It's not absolutely perfect, yet it's not horrible. I did like it and I like the message it gives. My response to a hater: 'Love me or hate me, I ...

Okay, I'm going to be completely honest. This poem is inaccurate, not very original. I'm only stating my opinion. Though my though isn't so good on that, I don't want ...

I was reading this and it occurred to me how much this reminds me of Panic At the Disco. If this was a real song, I would listen to it. ...

Oh gods, I laughed so hard when reading this. I did spot a few problems though. Have bought self diary. Bad idea. Thought had too complex thoughts before, this will ...

It's quite short, I was slightly disappointed on that. I have issues with politics, I believe the government is hiding crud we should know from us. So this fit in ...

It wasn't bad, but I felt, it could've been better. Though it did have an advantage, emotional advantage that is. It reminds me one of my particular family members deaths ...

Look, writers block is normal. I've been writing about for, four years and I have the problem more often than not. It's painful, difficult, frustrating, and annoying. I hate it. ...

Ooooh, I love drama! I felt the frustration and anger from Ledan. If I was in his shoes I would've said something, probably like. 'Yeah I have a ******* problem, ...

It's a bit short, and I only wish I could've read more. I really loved how you put the words and how it sounded. I want to read more! You ...

I felt the emotions, especially in the last part. "Mom, he touched me!" "No he didn't, you only want attention..." "MOM! Why would I lie about-" "Because you want me ...

Truthfully I didn't really find it interesting, this was a little 'bland' but no worries my friend. It's fixable. Go over it, examine it and see what you can change ...

This gave me chills! That's how good it was! The parts that really stood out to me, really got my adrenaline pumping was the following lines: Tall, lifeless buildings aligned ...

I can really relate to the character, it's almost funny. I didn't feel as if I was looking through the characters eyes. I felt I WAS her. I love the ...

Holy crap... This was intense, it brought me to tears. I wanted to leap into the story and beat the living hell out of her father. Teach him a lesson ...