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Scarecrow

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Viva LA Vida: Chapter I

    Very nice, but you should break it up in paragraphs to make it more readable. A big slab of writing makes my eyes hurt. Also Viva La Vida is in ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Lights Begin To Twinkle (revised)

    Wow, I honestly don't know what to say. That was just like, to perfect man... You developed the characters amazingly well. It was written amazingly. The plot was awesome. The ...

    Jan 5, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Afterlife Phenomenon (Preview)

    No not lucky me, lucky me would be me holding The Afterlife Phenomenon or your other book saying, oh so thats how it goes. Cause right now I'm doing my ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Deltora Series

    I loved it when I was 11, bought all the books, but as I got older I just didn't love it as much, turned actually to Eragon. It's ok and ...

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Afterlife Phenomenon (Preview)

    LOL, I live in Australia, so it's summer break. Plus it's still got another month to go xD.

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Afterlife Phenomenon (Preview)

    Hmm I see 2 solutions: 1. Beg and beg till you give in. 2. Invent a mind reading device and read your mind. Both have great odds of success :D

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Afterlife Phenomenon (Preview)

    Hmm I'm gona have to persuade my parents to let me buy it off lulu or amazon. And did you say books? You mean there's more? Gimme, gimme gimme.

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Running With Wolves Ch. 1

    Hmm, In that case, hurry up and write, I wana read what happens next.

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Madness

    Kk Thanks guys.

    Jan 4, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Madness

    A black texture is an object, it's like a pen and you can draw with it, but it goes through the paper but you can draw all pretty colors with ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Failing

    Death, you've gotta do two reviews before you post something xD I thought the poems were good, need some work but have potential, maybe combine them or make them longer. ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Man in the Picture

    I swear to god you sound like a guy who writes reviews in the New York Times Bestsellers. I actually saw that book in shop yesterday, but I was flat ...

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Your last friend

    Kk Thanks Gahks, i'll work on it.

    Jan 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: More Than Just a Friend

    Uhh just saying, shouldn't a song go into the song section?

    Jan 1, 2009


The shame of being a man - is there any better reason to write?
— Gilles Deleuze