Scarecrow

Um, What? Seriously how am I supposed to review that? I'll I can remember is that you had a suicide bomber, a car on a children's show lost it's virginity, ...

As tex said, and as in your fist chapter, you need to break this up. One long chapter is hard to read. On a good, well actually great note, your ...

Now I don't do all those nitpicking reviews with all that nitpicking and such. First, I think you should describe her surroundings more, all I can gather is she's in ...

Well I for one, really liked it. The characters are already developing well, although I do find it hard to see the mother as an actual person, but as you ...

Oooooh I like this one, alot of question marks though. But death com'on you've gotta do two reviews before you post any of your own work, and keep a 2:1 ...

Moonlight - she was 16 when he died, it says so in there, so when she's driving she would be 17 as her birthday is before his. Onto the review: ...

I like where your going with this, its just to short for me to form a real opinion on it. Chapter one is just to short, I don't have the ...

My names Jason, hurray im the bad guy (evil laugh) On to your story, and note I don't comment on grammer and that as my grammer isen't all that great. ...

I actually thought the pace was ok, it wasen't to rushed but it was fast enough to not make me stop and try and flick through it faster. Unfortunatly there ...

Strange it's as if you wrote a book about me... Stalker!! I like wher your going with it, it makes me wonder whats going to happen next and keeps me ...