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Re: Am I the only one?
Thank you so much for the review! I'll send you my edited piece if you want! :D
Jul 21, 2013 -
Re: The Fall
I have so many favorite poems it is unbelievable but I think this tops them all. And the best part is, you aren't even a professional writer. This is my ...
May 19, 2013 -
Re: Clocks.
Well I had a lot of ideas woven in here and His earth is basically God's earth, to signal we are all like human I guess. And when I said ...
Mar 22, 2013 -
Re: Monsters.
This are like monsters inside of us, and just "bad" things in general. Like feelings that you want to keep hidden that are itching to get out, or like a ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Monsters.
Defiantly metaphorical!:)
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Monsters.
This poem is metaphor. It is talking about monsters but like everyday monsters that we are afraid of. Like hunger, bullying, stuff like that :)
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Monsters.
Thanks so much!! I am new to the writing thing so any tip will be taken gladly !Thanks!
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Next Time.
this was basically about how humans themselves they feel one thing, but say another. Feelings that we don't share.
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: From Hell We Crawl.
Thanks so much! Yeah,I totally just realized my spelling errors now. Ooops :3 All of my poems I make all have this basic theme to it so... ;)
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: Until We Have Faces.
This is really good! thanks! I am a new writer so any help is gladly taken!
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: For When The Sun is Down, He comes to play.
Can you review my other poem ? Thanks!
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: For When The Sun is Down, He comes to play.
This is really great! :D HELPS MEALOT!
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: For When The Sun is Down, He comes to play.
Well uhmm this wasn't supposed to be about a playboy reference...
Mar 18, 2013 -
Re: For When The Sun is Down, He comes to play.
do you have any examples of how I could add description? Thanks!! :D
Mar 18, 2013 - Re: The Porcelain Doll Mar 18, 2013