Satira

Thank you! the reason I wrote this poem is that my friend has an eating disorder, and it's like she thinks she'll become invincible if she doesn't eat, even though ...

the reason I wrote this poem is that my friend has an eating disorder, and it's like she thinks she'll become invincible if she doesn't eat, even though it only ...

the reason I wrote this poem is that my friend has an eating disorder, and it's like she thinks she'll become invincible if she doesn't eat, even though it only ...

a child on the brink of eternity with no reason to cling to the edge. You did it, ancient.

dont don't don't it's so bad. it was my first post, and i didn't edit it at all. it is reaaaalllllyyyy badly done.

thanks! i'll change it.

(sorry, i posted this before, but in the wrong place) Thank you for the feedback! you're very kind. To answer your question: they aren't living there. they're spending the night ...

Thank you for the feedback! you're very kind. To answer your question: they aren't living there. they're spending the night under a bridge because it's been raining and the pipes, ...

Thank you for reviewing! I know, the grammar and capitalization, etc, was very below par- i was really excited just to post something (this was my first post.) speaking of, ...

i think that building a plane isn't the right metaphor. I mean, what if someone never 'builds a plane' in the first place? Then there isn't a way to climb ...

your efforts are noble. but opinions are hard to turn. shame, isn't it?

may i just say that this rhythm is flawless? Actually, it would be except for the last line... 'he knows he'll die'. it's an easy fix though. if you add ...

have you ever read that children's book about a rabbit that played in a cardboard box and turned it into a whole bunch of things WITH HIS MIND?! 'cause this ...

my qualm is that hatred and failure is universal. loneliness is too. (Ed sheeran said) all of these scars will bleed... but you know, they heal over time, eventually, even ...