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Sassykat

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: a story

    Do you think you could help me with the stanza thing? It's a formatting issue I haven't figured out yet, when I submitted it it was in neat little stanzas ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: my life

    Sweetheart, you know as well as I do that this is not your original work. This, copying what other people wrote first, is called plagiarism, and is very wrong. In ...

    May 31, 2013
  • Other » Lyrical, General Re: Crush vs. Cookie

    It was more of a description of differences, not really a pro/con thing--With just a hint of sarcasm thrown in, just for the heck of it. :)

    Mar 31, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Little Orphan Annie

    DUDE. This was super-intense! I'm sitting here thinking "whoa, someone is thinking outside the universe that the box is existing in." I like it! :D

    Feb 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A "J" for "Joy"

    Hmm...I'll have to edit this. It was supposed to be about candy canes. :P

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Prom With My Mom

    This is SO adorable! I am SO in love with Taylor. I want to take him to prom when I'm old enough. You have an amazing writing style, keep at ...

    Nov 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Blue Dress

    It was a well-written piece. I have one complaint, though, and that is that it wasn't rated. Some of the content certainly deserved 12+, even 16+. Just saying. I really ...

    Nov 24, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Stop and Stare Cover (edit)

    I just left the page and then came back so I could look at it again. It's so cool.

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Stop and Stare Cover (edit)

    Wow! So much better! I was staring for a good thirty works. Wow. Amazing. I keep going back up to stare at it some more...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Silence of Laughter

    This is so beautiful!

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: -boom-

    The only thing I didn't like about it were the eyes. Very unique, very cool. I liked the water look of it!

    Jul 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Falling Slowly

    I just have to say that I absolutely loved this. It was a little shaky at the beginning, and there was a problem with being repetitive throughout the whole thing ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: No Air (Jordin Sparks)(Revised)

    If I could like this a thousand times, I would. I found nothing wrong with it! It was simply fantastic! Well, I think one could make it a little more ...

    Jul 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Into Heaven

    One think to point out: If you are going up, into heaven, what's with the "Swooping Low," part at the beginning? Just a thought. The imagery was great in this ...

    Jun 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Buzzy

    Awww, this was so sweet. Just one thing: Typically when writing a poem you capitalize the first letter of each line. Just a thought. It's okay the way it is, ...

    Jun 13, 2011


The very worst use of time is to do very well what need not be done at all.
— Benjamin Tregoe