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Re: a story
Do you think you could help me with the stanza thing? It's a formatting issue I haven't figured out yet, when I submitted it it was in neat little stanzas ...
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: my life
Sweetheart, you know as well as I do that this is not your original work. This, copying what other people wrote first, is called plagiarism, and is very wrong. In ...
May 31, 2013 -
Re: Crush vs. Cookie
It was more of a description of differences, not really a pro/con thing--With just a hint of sarcasm thrown in, just for the heck of it. :)
Mar 31, 2012 -
Re: Little Orphan Annie
DUDE. This was super-intense! I'm sitting here thinking "whoa, someone is thinking outside the universe that the box is existing in." I like it! :D
Feb 14, 2012 -
Re: A "J" for "Joy"
Hmm...I'll have to edit this. It was supposed to be about candy canes. :P
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Prom With My Mom
This is SO adorable! I am SO in love with Taylor. I want to take him to prom when I'm old enough. You have an amazing writing style, keep at ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: The Blue Dress
It was a well-written piece. I have one complaint, though, and that is that it wasn't rated. Some of the content certainly deserved 12+, even 16+. Just saying. I really ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare Cover (edit)
I just left the page and then came back so I could look at it again. It's so cool.
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare Cover (edit)
Wow! So much better! I was staring for a good thirty works. Wow. Amazing. I keep going back up to stare at it some more...
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: The Silence of Laughter
This is so beautiful!
Jul 27, 2011 -
Re: -boom-
The only thing I didn't like about it were the eyes. Very unique, very cool. I liked the water look of it!
Jul 26, 2011 -
Re: Falling Slowly
I just have to say that I absolutely loved this. It was a little shaky at the beginning, and there was a problem with being repetitive throughout the whole thing ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: No Air (Jordin Sparks)(Revised)
If I could like this a thousand times, I would. I found nothing wrong with it! It was simply fantastic! Well, I think one could make it a little more ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Into Heaven
One think to point out: If you are going up, into heaven, what's with the "Swooping Low," part at the beginning? Just a thought. The imagery was great in this ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Buzzy
Awww, this was so sweet. Just one thing: Typically when writing a poem you capitalize the first letter of each line. Just a thought. It's okay the way it is, ...
Jun 13, 2011
