Sassykat

This was definitely different. This is one of those stories so profound, with so many deep layers of meaning, that I will probably remember it for a long, long time. ...

*shivers* You dreamed this? What kind of books do you read right before you sleep? I didn't see anything to critique, so I'll just let you know that I want ...

In response to CuteJack, I think this was a poem about one of many younger children whose mother just died (that's what's making them "sore" memories). That's the thing I ...

I only saw one thing that I was confused about for the longest time. I think it's just me, because I get confused about this a lot, but it goes ...

Just a few nitpicks: Turning around, my "friend" Georgie slung her arm around my neck and squ ee zed me as hard as possible. I think this was just a ...

I just have a couple things to say about this talent- and tasteful piece. Just that you really should use capitalization if you are going to use punctuation (but that's ...

Gyaaah! Why am I crying! This was so amazing! Yes, It was cliche, yes it was predictable, and yes it was....fantastic. You did an amazing job. Just one question: If ...

Oh this was fun. It was, regardless of the last two lines, a very confident poem. I actually feel the exact same way right now. In real life. It's a ...

How nice. I twas very refreshing, kind of a nice poem to read. I couldn't find any other nitpicks, so I'll just tell you what a wonderful job you did. ...

DramaLlama got most of the nitpicks I would have normally put, so I will just give the one other I found: He was a wonderful gentleman I had loved, until ...

This seemed to jump around in topics, to the point of not making least to me. At the end of the first stanza, I'm not sure what's with the colon, ...

“I don’t know . M aybe. I’m not getting my hopes up about anything. Most guys are douchers, why should I expect he’s anything different?” “I need a refill,” she ...

Sweet ness . Awesome. All I have to say is that you should capitalize the beginning of every line, not just the beginning of sentences. As for titles, here are ...

Yaaaah! I cannot stress more that you neeeeeeed to indeeeeeent. Since, though, that qaralynn already covered that, I'll do some more specific nitpicks. Not today, not tomorrow, but in the ...

Another great one! All I have to say is CaPiTaLiZe. And if you're going to use the dot dot dot sequence, use three dots instead of two or else it ...