Sassykat

Okay, I just have to ask, is this intentionally without capital letters? For another, is the punctuation only supposed to be at the end of the poem, or throughout? I ...

Ditto to GuntaFX! First of all, I am pretty sure "categorised" is spelled "categorized." Another, when you do your line breaks, you jump around some from starting the new line ...

I really liked it, but if I remember right it was rated E for everybody. I thought it was inaccurately rated, personally. Good story, I like it! Some of the ...

Okay, no offense, but that was really confusing to me. She was really beautiful, but got sick? Got hurt? People made fun of her? What was the "fair flow" her ...

Dearest Haven, FIRST OF ALL, IS THIS HAVEN OR HEAVEN? SORRY, I DECIDED TO DO ALL CAPS SO IT STANDS OUT, NOT TO BE RUDE! What more can I say ...

I really like it, though I think that some of the phrases contradict the idea of the poem, like where you say, "and it's bark, shattered hopes." If these hopes ...

I very much agree with Nike, it's an awesome poem but difficult to understand. When you talk about pen and paper, camera and film, are you talking about making a ...

I liked it, I thought it very deep. But that's coming from an emotional teenager, haha. I think I have to agree with the others, though, punctuation is a necessity. ...