Saruka

akjsfsdkjfhkjdf thank u?? i actually had to write something for my theatre group monologue thing so i just kind of rambled about my crush?? but yeah thanks!!!!

Hi! I revised that sentence, so hopefully it sounds better now. My first paragraph was the one where I really tried to focus on description, telling what happened that night. ...

Hi there, and thank you for the review! I didn't even realize that I didn't write the 'was'! I changed up the wording of the last sentence too, do you ...

hey, super sorry, but can i be removed from the taglist? because of the triggers and all that?

I was having a lot of trouble with rhythm, yeah. I'll try and find a fix for that. And thanks! n o s t o p

Yeah, I really had no clue what to say there. Guess I was blanking. I'll change that! Thanks!

Thanks! I didn't use commas and periods for more of a line-to-line feel. I also tried to have each line sounds somewhat similar in syllables, so I will change 'the ...

Thanks! I didn't use commas and periods for more of a line-to-line feel. I also tried to have each line sounds somewhat similar in syllables, so I will change 'the ...

my gosh, I love this!! I'm commenting here now so I can remind myself to do a review later,

me too

Hi Kara! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review! I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about ...

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(working on it (:)

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