Saruka

Hey Ferruccio! I thoroughly enjoyed this, but let's get into the review. As @menushathenodi said below, I have no idea what 'extreme bare' means. It kind of halted the rhythm ...

Hey! I really liked this poem, but let's get into the review. Having told that I'm a fool, This line didn't really make sense to me. Can you clarify what ...

I loved this poem, and for amazingly short and sweet it was. So I'm going to write a really short review because there's not much to improve on. This poem ...

Hey CaitlinMarie! Oh my gosh, this is beautiful! I love this, and I feel like I could relate to every single aspect of this short story. I was extremely interested ...

Hi Charlotte! Let me first start out by saying that it's apparent that you've been bullied before. I know how hard that can be and how important it is to ...

Hi Carlito! I'm going to review as I read, so here we go! When you said, in quotation marks, “yeah, let’s go.” try to make the 'yeah' capital since you're ...

Okay, wow. I loved this. Sadly I read 1.2 before 1.1, so I already knew the basis of what happened, but wow. Just- just wow. Something I did notice in ...

So I clicked on your story because it was in the green room, not looking at the author behind it. I got to the end and scrolled back up but ...

Carlito, Let me just say first off that I love this story. Please write more. Now, let me tell you why. I'm not going to criticize you, maybe because I'm ...

Hey Charlotte! Great writing. I was really into the story, already thinking about what might happen next. Unfortunately, I was a little disappointed when I found it ending. Thoughts were ...

I'm new to this whole thing, so you don't have to take any of my suggestions. First off, AHHHHHHHHHH That whole story was like an oxymoron (excited me to see ...