Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
I was breathing fast, my heart beat accelerated and jumped for joy. For once I was happy. After all this time people were finally seeing me. No one ever thought I could do this but they were wrong! A smile was plastered on my face and my eyes filled with only one emotion. Joy. The adrenaline was addicting. It excited me to see the fear in people's eyes as they beg for mercy. I laugh, nothing could satisfy my craving like this could. There screams were like beautiful music and the red that painted the walls was alluring. I loved it. Every second.
Hmm...well this is rather short piece on what appears to be a bit of a feeling here. There's no real connection to anything else to suggest this could be a part of a short story or a novel or a prologue or anything else honestly. Its not even really a description, but it just seems like some sort of depiction of this one singular feeling that this one person is experiencing.
I think it really makes for a powerful piece here, because there are simply no other strings attached to this one, just a thing about the pure joy that this one person is experiencing and I think it really comes together very well to form a powerful moment that almost feels like this one second of thought frozen in time.
Overall, its such a simple piece here, but I think it does what it sets out to do really well and its just the sort of thing that leaves a smile on your face. I don't believe there's really anything more I can say about this one here either, since it really is just that simple as a story.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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