Sarrasponda

Ok here's that review: No lie, you've got a pretty good writing style so your problems are not usually with wording and all that. I think HomeschooledTeen already commented on ...

Hello there! Just happened across your poem, figured I'd give a shot at reviewing it. Now first I have to say, poetry is not my strong point, so forgive my ...

Hello KLovelace! I loved your poem so I thought I'd like your prologue, and I was right :D You've got a really interesting idea going on here, pure fantasy (which ...

Wow! I'm not really into poems but yours is fabulous! :D I've never been a rhymer but you've used that tool really well in your story. However, the most important ...

Hello! I liked your poem overall. Good idea. I think I'll review it one verse at a time: 'Light across the street Light that flickers at my feet Yellow you ...

Hello there! I've never reviewed a poem before, but I have to start sometime. :P I love your title; and how 'our love' is repeated in the first and last ...

Hi there! Here is my review! Ok, so cool story idea. :P I like how you end it on kind of a cliff hanger, like what's going to happen next? ...

Hello, hello! Just wanted to say great work- your vocabulary and language use are excellent :D It's really interesting reading about an arctic expedition, it's the first one I've read ...

Hello Candid! :D Saw your story, thought I'd read it, here I am! So: figured I may as well write a review. :P Have to say first though that I ...

Hi Tazzaar! You've got a really cool story idea here. I like how you started with him as a young boy going to bed, then began the rest of the ...

Hello, hello! I love your story! Well, what I've read anyways. :P It's truly amazing and I am having trouble finding things to point out or make changes too. My ...

Hello! :D Just dropping by to say this sounds like an excellent story and to offer some advice. So your general story idea is amazing, really great. The only things ...

Hello! Was reading your work and thought I should leave some of my humble advice. :P It's very good, hardly anything to even think about changing. At the end of ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading your story so I thought I should say something on it. :P First off: It's very good. But there a few things I'd like to point ...

Wow what an amazing story! Your style of writing is excellent for this; you created the horrifying murder scene and the tension between the ladies perfectly. I can find hardly ...