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Hello. I like that the majority of the poem is in questions. It mirrors the feeling of the poem and adds a very nice style and touch. I noticed, though, ...

Funny and light, despite the title. I like the tone, and the repetitive countdown of the first two lines of each stanza, gradually approaching the end of the world. However, ...

Great! I really like the new and interesting point of view you have here- a really cool and imaginative idea. So, there wasn't much wrong here that I could find, ...

I like this, thought there are a few minor problems. The whole basis for the poem is beautiful and sad and very well thought-out to be put into words. I ...

I liked this poem a lot! In fact, I found myself trying to sing the words rather than read them aloud. :D Anyways, actually, by trying to do that I ...

I have one word: Deep. This was awesome poetry, and actually the flow was pretty good too, which is pretty amazing considering they were not short poems. Well, maybe they ...

Ooh, great poem! I loved it. Nice topic to pick and great use of metaphors and imagery; I could really see the places in my head, the leaves and the ...

Hey gummie, I love this first chapter! The imagery is awesome as always, the spelling, etc. is perfect and I felt like I knew the characters in person. Although, I ...

A pretty good poem; I liked it a lot, especially the subject. I think you had some really good thoughts going on in your head. :) Well, the rhythm could ...

Awesome chapter, dude! :) I really could just jump in; I didn't need any background to figure out what was going on or who or when or where, because it ...

Heya great poem! :) I loved the first stanza; it was very funny and had a good lead to make you want to read the rest of the poem. One ...

Hey there! I really liked this poem. Awesome rhythm for the most part, awesome beginning, awesome ending. I didn't see any typos or minor errors or anything like that, so ...

Great job on this poem! I really liked it. Just a couple of minor typos: knowing their going to let you down - supposed to be "they're". mines going to ...

Awesome poem! I liked the ending the most; it really wrapped up well even though it was a short poem. Pisces, eyes winnowing across my skin as though each cell’s ...

Nice! I liked it, the topic, word choice, etc. I'll divide stuff into stanzas to make it easier. Ever so beautiful, isn't it? This fairy tale life you live? Even ...