Sapi

Hi there Ionut and happy World Cup! First off, I would like to say that this is a very interesting topic and I think you have fairly sound logic in ...

Hey there Bloodink and happy World Cup! I like the ambiguity and concise manner of this poem- on one hand it is purposefully vague and applicable to many situations, and ...

Hi InfiniteSnowfall! This is a very good start! I was very intrigued by the title, I haven't read a poem with quite the same message before. Creativity is the greatest ...

Hi there, Sarrasponda! Lovely poem! The premise is refreshingly original, though somehow in a well-worn kind of way, an atmosphere which I enjoy. It feels wistful and old-fashioned, yet full ...

Hiya! Sapi for a quick review. For an unedited free verse, not bad at all! Of course, as you know, it can use some refining, but sometimes raw emotion is ...

Hey there! Sorry it took so long for me to get it together, I've been busy the past week. I think you did a very good job in revising this! ...

Hi there ImHero, the 'philosophy' caught my eye, soooo I'll just drop you a quick review. :) There are lots of good thoughts in this essay. The main problem, which ...

Well..That sure is twisted. A bit creepy, too, but of course you meant it to freak people out so I guess that's okay. I'm assuming from the title that this ...

Hiya! This is Sapi with a review as requested. :) Although this is a well-worn subject, I felt like it wasn't too unoriginal after all. It's extremely emotionally raw and ...

Hi there veelyn and welcome to YWS! :D First of all, just to get this out of the way, did you originally have this divided into lines and stanzas and ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! You accidentally posted this in Literary instead of where it should go. This is a fine idea, but instead of here, it should be posted ...

Okay. I just have to say a big WOW to you. Awesome job with this! First off, I just love your eloquent writing. But what really touched me about this ...

Heya! This is Sapi. You only have one review, and I figured I really needed to review it, soooo....here I am. I don't generally review novels, but I have to ...

This is intriguing. I shall write you a short review, so that this is no longer in the green room. :) Personally, I would love to hear more about this. ...

Hiya! This work looked lonely with only one review, so here I am to help you! ;) So. This is an interesting piece in its subject matter, but it could ...