Saphire

Okay so this kind of confused me in the beginning because I couldn't figure out who was talking. I like when books can get you guessing even though it's the ...

I really like this story. I love all the detail that you have put into it so far. There is just on thing that really bugged me and that's when ...

This is really cool! I don't think I have ever read a story where people could weave water other then Avatar the last air bender comics. I like how a ...

Oh, wow. I how it feels personally to have an anger problem because I had one up until a few years ago and still have one till this day. I ...

I'm not to sure what to say to this. I think if you give a little more description on each character then it would a lot better. I also was ...

I really like how the prologue is written. It really speaks to the anger I keep buried within me. This seems to be the start of a very good story ...

Well the only thing I really saw wrong with this was that you left the "r" off of the word her. Other then that it was really interesting. You should ...

I really like this. It makes me think of my father and how little I really have gotten to see him. The way it is written is really good and ...

Well I already told you I liked this before you ever put it on here I just figuered that I should tell you again. You're a good writer but I ...

Hi, dogs. I like the style that you wrote this in. It's really cool. I feel that it is a necessity to use that kind of language. Some people never ...