Saphira

This is amazing! It is really well written and the flow is good. Apart from saying 'is' twice in the first stanza and the miss spelling of pretences it is ...

I really liked this, very original! I agree that the last stanza seems out of place because it contradicts with the rest of the poem. Apart from that it is ...

I really liked this poem and i think that you got through alot of emotion. The words you use are fantastic and the way that it is written is amazing. ...

This book was amazing1 I thought that it was so tragic but also a story of hope. I think that the film definatly didnt do it justice.

Thank you for the critiques! I have made some changes which hopefully will make it better. I made it brief because a lot more gets told later. Thanks a lot! ...

I realy liked this. It is really happy and cheery. I love all the colours and the imagery in the poem. I love it! :D

I don't like any of the Terry Pratchet books. I find them boring and Confusing. I got given loads of books by him before and just passed them on to ...

My brother introdced them to me and i didn't think i would enjoy them, but i did. I think that the book are much better than the film though.

This is Amazing! I love it so much that i can't find anything wrong with it! Keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more!

The poem was good. Some of the line breaks are unnecessary and just distract the reader from the meaning of the poem. The describtion is good but could still be ...

Very good. I enjoyed every bit of it. In places it needs more describtion but overall it was fantastic. I can't wait for more. Saphira

Wicked! sounds like the true story to me!