Saphira

I actually liked this. I havn't read much abstract poetry but i liked this. I agree that some work needs to be done on the last stanza because it seems ...

I thought this was really good and mysterious. I thought that the prologue was confusing and a little hard to understand but the way it was written mirrored the characters ...

I really liked tis. It flowed really well and i thought that the small sentences added lots of suspense to it and made it more interesting. I like how you ...

This is really good. You have kept on eith the charaters and the dialogue flowed really well. You also added in a lot more describtion which pulled together but kept ...

I thought this was really good. You kept to the characters really well and everythng seemed to flow. It was really good and you should carry on rting it, i ...

I really like 'My sister's keeper'. I thought it was absolutly amazing but that is the only book of hers that i like. All the others seem flat and really ...

I am reading the trilogy at the moment and i have only one chapter to read at the end of Abhorsen! I loved all of them and i thought that ...

Wow! I really like this. It is really emotional. I like how you start it off with just a normal day and then get into the real meaning of the ...

I am not going to line by line this as it has already been done but i will give pointers on what i thought was good and what could be ...

I liked this. Even though it is short it has a lot of meaning. We are the only ones, who never really cared. I like thse two lines. They are ...

Hmm...LOTR or Harry Potter? I can't decide. I think that the plot in LOTR is better and more complex but the describtion is deadly. Whereas Harry Potter has a simple ...

I really liked this. The describtion at the beginning was fantastic. I was starting to wonder if Mother Nature was mourning the death of my sister. This line is really ...

I love it! It gets across the meaning of friendship and the secrets that come with it. It's not to long and the rhyming is really good. :D **** Can't ...

I read Eragon because i saw the movie trailer. I liked the books but i agree that the ending to the second book is irritating and pointless. even though there ...

Critique-Chapter 1 The punctuation is good and is very effective in the dialogue. I could find very little wrong with this as it was written well. I don't normally like ...