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Re: Chapter 2: A Grand Waste of Time
Samk642 here!! I enjoyed this chapter and the last one, and am intrigued by the story. Humanity is gone. The planet is destroyed and no one knows what happened!!! I ...
Nov 18, 2016 -
Re: The Keeper of Eyeteeth
Samk642 dropping in from the Land of Postive Outlook!! Let's get this puppy out of the green room!! This is a great plot. I was on the edge of my ...
Nov 17, 2016 -
Re: Sorry Can't Help Anything (Chapter One)
Samk642 dropping in from the Land of Postive Outlook!!!!! So, to begin.... Loved it!! I like how you introduced the maim character, and gave us her backstory. So, for Nathan, ...
Nov 15, 2016 -
Re: In Real Life
Samk642 dropping in from the Land of Postive Outlook!!! So, I like how it opens up with Tommy, and the set up of his story! Some things I that I ...
Nov 15, 2016 -
Re: Regicide - Chapter One
Samk642 dropping in to give my two cents on this storry so far!!! I love it!! Absolutely Fantastic!! I like how you set up the story and introduced the characters. ...
Nov 11, 2016 -
Re: I loved, I killed, then I lied.
Hey there!! Samk642 popping in for a review!! First things first. HOLY CHEESEBALLS BATMAN!!! That was some fantastic description use. I love how you were so great at describing such ...
Nov 10, 2016 -
Re: After the Fall - Chapters 1 & 2
Hey, Samk642 dropping in to tell you this is amazing, As ChieRynn stated here below, this is a fantastic story and it's paced well. I tend to not read such ...
Oct 7, 2016 -
Re: The Grimm:End Of time Chapter 2
Hey their earth, Samk642 back, and loving how the storyline is being cultivated here! I really enjoyed reading this and like how menrow has a backstory in this chapter! Also, ...
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: The Grimm:End Of time Chapter 1
Hey buddy, Samk642, popping in to leave a quick review I have something to say real quick before getting to picky, nice job!! So, my biggest critique for this is, ...
Aug 31, 2016 -
Re: The Correlations - Prologue
I got hooked in, but some things to consider 1. The description said it was a prolouge, but it's only towards the end do we know where the characters are ...
Aug 23, 2016
