Sam

YAYYY!!!! much better...

i think so...

Wow. Beautiful...you have an awesome vocabulary, and you use the words in a very elegant style. My only critique- when people are speaking, start a new line. that's about it... ...

Oh...he he. I had it italicized in Word, but it didn't transfer...they're supposed to be like passing notes. :D

sorry...:D

That's OK. make it rough. We readers like that kind of stuff. :D

it was, firestarter...:D just something I came up with off the top of myhead

the language at the end is Scottish Gaelic. :D it reads like this (know the grammar's wrong...english word order!) sleep, sleep my child slep and dream

'you are me'.... at first i thought, what the heck, but then i seriously started to cry...OMG firestarter! no real critique...might think of some once i go get a Kleenex™ ...

just for some clarification- you guys didn't comment on tis but i read it and noticed this. the reason he's scared of the guy when he shows him the coin ...

It's very beautiful... :D I don't have any real critique! darn..you people right too well!

Ha ha. Talking about Drunkism, there, Firestarter? oh gosh...after reading this we seriously need you in the news group. You're good at writin g in an ariticle format...

it's painfully obvious

Ha ha. Only this time I don't get it. I know this is meant to be sort of mysterious, but still, what? Explain a bit, please!

This poem made me burst out laughing...ESPECIALLY ESPECIALLY after reading the rules of Drunkism. Cool. It's just so...strange and completely idiotic. Well done.