Sam

I'M DEAD!!!! this was an interesting say the least. sort of awkward, not really an award winner or anything but, ya know, it was good for what it was. oh ...

I do. Very much so. :D

You're really having fun with this, aren't you? lol. No mistakes that I found that Hunter didn't more comments, either.

OK, this is pretty good, just don't use the word 'Donovan' so much. Use a pronoun instead. :D you're on a roll today, Liz!!!! keep it up!

EMMA!!! quit writing so well!!! I know you asked for comments...but I truthfully can't find any... the cute nurse guy. niiice

you can wipe blood off, you just have to have nature's miracle or whatever

BUH BUH BUH BUMMMM!!! oh...my...gosh...TBR, this is perhaps the best thing you've ever written. It's great, it's emotional, and you can totally see it. and i love the ending..

I didn't read the other part of it, so I don't have anything to compare this to, but I did think it was really well done. This person seems so ...

I know I am. :twisted:

'Tis pretty good...although, if you're going for a serious story, you have to work at it. Training to be a lumberjack...

sure. just scroll back a couple posts...:D

it's an add-on to an existing story... :wink:

Yeah, i have to agree with brad. This is pretty good...not my favorite story of all time but I'd like to read the other 9,000 words. :D

To be honest with you, the first part is so-so. Not as good. but in the ending...that rocks. I think a lot of us can relate to it, sort of ...

You're just a regular old inspiring beam of sunshine, aren't you, Jack? lol Basically, yeah. haha I'm not quite sure what hekategirl thinks, though...we need to do a couple more ...