Sam

'It still made my head clang and my headache drum faster. ' These two lines were very clunky to me. Though I know it's just the repetition of 'head' that ...

Interesting. Very interesting. And good. But, boy, do you wander. The poem is here then it jumps across the street and over the fence and then to Denmark. Confuzzling, if ...

The only thing I would change would to be to make the whole Ukranian thing a little less obvious. Throughout the poem, you're expecting some sort of outrageous political statement, ...

Rhyming is, let's say, something I very strongly dislike. So, as you can guess, I'm not going to be very nice. But bear with me, Lindsey, OK? Short, sweet, got ...

Wow. This is so Mr. Brightside. You portray the feeling of that awkward moment...that awkward moment when you say hi to someone you haven't seen in awhile and you really ...

aha, mr. regressing has written a good poem!!! meant to give you harsh, over the top critique...but no, can't find any. *insert four letter word here* I love the image ...

Wierd... yet interesting at the same time. My only critique- cut back on the number of times you use the word 'voices' in the first paragraph. It's kind of redundant. ...

It was a bit long for what it was, to tell the truth, Wu, but it was still pretty good. If you're going to keep this style though, you may ...

is very strange. But, try as I might, I couldn't find anything awkward about your sentence structure. Your friends must be mistaken. :D No real critique. Although I do like ...

I LOVE SASKATCHEWAN!!! ha ha, long story. But...awwww. This is so cool. It'd make a great teary/sad movie...ha ha. I'm sorry, I don't really have any critique. I read over ...

Ok, Firestarter, i'm going to be tough on you so get ready!!! 'Esben looked genuinely shocked, and exclaimed “Relic! Relic, he says! This ‘relic’ has been passed down by generation ...

It's actually quite good. :D No real critique...I thought it was great. A little on the strange side, but that's OK. If i think of anything later, I'll tell you.

i thought this was pretty good. Though I thought it lacked a little description. You say this guy has a Brooklyn accent, yet you don't tell us what it sounds ...

ha ha...:D I thought it was pretty interesting. It was pretty intense, though, so if you ever have real people acting this out tell them to really do it with ...

This reminds me of that song by Avril Laveigne...'She wants to go hooome but nobody's home, so there she lies-' sorry. :D Have to sing sometimes. this was bit long, ...