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Hey again, Jessicarabbit! Ooh, this chapter was very good. I liked how you established your characters quickly and painlessly- there's Michelle, who's very set in her ways, and Kim, who's ...

Hey, Oregongirl! Ooh, Nahimana's pretty brave- the ending was super awesome. Cliffhangers rock, don't they? I hope you carry the excitement, though- I want to know what happens! There was ...

Hey, Sassy Lady! This was a really cool story- it's definitely different. I loved Fonda, the reporter...she was super cool. One must often risk lives for good journalism, indeed. :wink: ...

Hey, Wiggster! Ooh, I love your writing style- it's so sweet! And, what's more, you managed to do an emotional piece without making it totally sappy. Never mind that it ...

Hey, Girl_in_pink! Definitely a fun story- very readable, with a character who's not openly whiny but excellently sarcastic. :D There was one thing I would change, though: THE HOOK: This ...

Hey, Flamatoria! This was a really cool story- quite original. It wasn't something you'd see every day in the forums, and for that, I was glad. :D There was one ...

The easiest thing to do is simply to hit 'return' between paragraphs. I did that for your post above, which I'm technically not supposed to do...but it was largely for ...

Hey again-again, KiteRide! :wink: Another grand section- I really do love Chantal. She's sweet, but a bit of a ditz...a well-developed ditz, that is. Forrest is a heavy bit of ...

Hey again, KiteRide! I liked this chapter quite a bit, too- it definitely lived up to your first. :D Edna was an interesting character...more subtly developed than the rest had ...

Hey, Chocoholic! You have a very easy-flowing, natural style...it's quite nice to read. Definitely not choppy, definitely refreshing. :wink: There were a few things I'd change about Kara's word, thoug

Hey, KiteRide! This was a really cool story! Usually, I tend to shy away from reading contemporary stuff, because the characters and conflicts often fall flat. I was proven wrong, ...

Hey, Magicman! Ooh, I loved this piece- a bit of mysterious fantasy in a cabin in the snow? Automatically awesome, in any way, shape, or form. :wink: I did like ...

Hey, DisposableHero! I like your writing style very much- it's emotional, but very beautiful and flows without a hitch. You have an interesting conflict, too, which is always nice to ...

Hey, Snoinkus! Here's the thing- your style is perfect for disturbing subjects. It's just detached enough to make it seem flippant, and the way the narrative is done, the people ...

Hey, Heaven Sent! New historical fiction always makes me happy- especially with super-awesome characters like Jacques Ambler. He was done really well, as the others have said...usually, the characters