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Re: Fly Away
It is simple. That is the best thing about it. Its so simple that one just cant hate it. But one cant love it either because it does not have ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Candles
First the good part: The progression is good. "Neil walked through the empty apartment, the only sound being his uniform footsteps. When it was him and Adam, their joined footsteps ...
May 31, 2013 -
Re: War of all against all
It does not rhyme so well . Its interesting what your trying to symbolize . At one point it felt like a song , a dark song ! I liked ...
May 10, 2013 -
Re: Boom
Its just awesome ! It really is dude . Astonishing ! The style is very similar to Chuck Palahniuk , he is my favorite author ! I will start researching ...
May 8, 2013 -
Re: Thanks For The Pain... Not.
Its casual but not In a bad way . I cant really say I enjoyed reading this but it has potential . It demonstrates problems of every day life in ...
May 7, 2013 -
Re: Hope
The starting was awesome: There's always this hope that lingers in you like a drug that you got addicted to. Or a song you can't stop listening to. Or an ...
May 7, 2013