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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Boulder On My Shoulders

    I loved this because it so, completely suits the situation I'm in with my ex 'best friend'. It sucks :D But I can so relate to this, I have this ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Perfect Day

    Wow that was really good! It was really cute! Loved the main characters! However, I think you could have put more detail into the introduction because it seemed like you ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Perfect Girlfriend

    I really liked this. It was sort of sweet with a hint of angst? A good combination of love and hurt, blended well together. You misspelled 'soo' at the end ...

    May 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rejection

    Wow very emotional. it had a good sense of heartbreak and rejection. I just had an issue with the rhythm is all. It wasn't regular, the rhyming didn't seem forced ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Beneath the Smile

    This is truely amazing. It's very honest and has great heart put into it, that I can tell. I really felt the emotion behind it and I am guessing it ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To Be Unique

    I really like this! This is amazing! I like your style. It was a nice rhythm going to it, and it seemed a very sweet poem containing a lot of ...

    Mar 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You And I

    Oh I love it! It's adorable, straight to the point. However, I have to agree with the previous comment. It does seem a bit short and the rhythm is slightly ...

    Mar 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Son of the moon

    OH MY GOSH! This is amazing work, I really enjoyed it! I felt that the rhythm was generally good, but with one or two errors. Oh well, nobody is perfect. ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Abducted

    Wow! This was really amazing. You are a very talented writer, well done. I especially loved the last couple of lines. I felt they gave that big 'bang!' ending, which ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2

    Awh! :) I just love this. It's such a pretty piece, and its so sweet and cute. Please write more? =] I'd love you if you did :D ha. This ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Clueless

    Hey! This was so neat! I really liked it. I love the character of Imo, she seems pretty awesome. She comes across as confident and original. Nice. Dougie seems pretty ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dream

    Wow! Very...unexpected ending! LOL! It was good though. It started off very pretty and, well, cliche. But, lucky for you, you managed to save it with that ending. I loved ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Paralyzing Shortcomings

    Awh I love that! It's so inspirational and speaks for its self I guess. I won't lie, when I read the title I though it was going to be a ...

    Feb 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I ever,

    Wow I really loved this. =] It's like, love and heartbreak all in one! Great job! I like your style, let me know if you ever need a review. I ...

    Feb 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Kiss Me, before I Die

    Hey! Firstly, I would like to say nice job on this. It's a very original idea and you portrayed it very well without turning it into a major cliche, which ...

    Feb 6, 2011


We shall not cease from exploration, and the end of all our exploring will be to arrive where we started and know the place for the first time.
— T.S. Eliot