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Re: Boulder On My Shoulders
I loved this because it so, completely suits the situation I'm in with my ex 'best friend'. It sucks :D But I can so relate to this, I have this ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Perfect Day
Wow that was really good! It was really cute! Loved the main characters! However, I think you could have put more detail into the introduction because it seemed like you ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: The Perfect Girlfriend
I really liked this. It was sort of sweet with a hint of angst? A good combination of love and hurt, blended well together. You misspelled 'soo' at the end ...
May 13, 2011 -
Re: Rejection
Wow very emotional. it had a good sense of heartbreak and rejection. I just had an issue with the rhythm is all. It wasn't regular, the rhyming didn't seem forced ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Beneath the Smile
This is truely amazing. It's very honest and has great heart put into it, that I can tell. I really felt the emotion behind it and I am guessing it ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: To Be Unique
I really like this! This is amazing! I like your style. It was a nice rhythm going to it, and it seemed a very sweet poem containing a lot of ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: You And I
Oh I love it! It's adorable, straight to the point. However, I have to agree with the previous comment. It does seem a bit short and the rhythm is slightly ...
Mar 29, 2011 -
Re: Son of the moon
OH MY GOSH! This is amazing work, I really enjoyed it! I felt that the rhythm was generally good, but with one or two errors. Oh well, nobody is perfect. ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Abducted
Wow! This was really amazing. You are a very talented writer, well done. I especially loved the last couple of lines. I felt they gave that big 'bang!' ending, which ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: Paper Hearts And Bagels Pt2
Awh! :) I just love this. It's such a pretty piece, and its so sweet and cute. Please write more? =] I'd love you if you did :D ha. This ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Clueless
Hey! This was so neat! I really liked it. I love the character of Imo, she seems pretty awesome. She comes across as confident and original. Nice. Dougie seems pretty ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Dream
Wow! Very...unexpected ending! LOL! It was good though. It started off very pretty and, well, cliche. But, lucky for you, you managed to save it with that ending. I loved ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Paralyzing Shortcomings
Awh I love that! It's so inspirational and speaks for its self I guess. I won't lie, when I read the title I though it was going to be a ...
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: If I ever,
Wow I really loved this. =] It's like, love and heartbreak all in one! Great job! I like your style, let me know if you ever need a review. I ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Kiss Me, before I Die
Hey! Firstly, I would like to say nice job on this. It's a very original idea and you portrayed it very well without turning it into a major cliche, which ...
Feb 6, 2011
