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Wow Clarity! This poem is so sad :( It made me nearly cry (I can't because I'm in a library full of people in my school right now). I can't ...

I really enjoyed this. :) Titled got me straight away. I was just sort of scanning through and it was like... oh that looks interesting. Boom. I love the simplicity ...

Hello. :) Is this poem also sort of a song? It reads like lyrics. It's quite powerful. :) I do however have a few comments about the last couple of ...

Incredible! I loved how the ending matched with the intro. :)

Hello! Firstly I must say this is marvelous. :) Especially because of your age, I was never able to write like that two years ago. Even now, perhaps. :D But ...

Wow this is really good. I was a little put off at first because it is quite short to look at first glance, but when I finished it I realized ...

Oh wow! This poem is amazing. At first when I glanced over it I almost whinced a little at the length of it, but as I started reading I was ...

Hello! I would have to disagree with the comment above ^^ I think this is poetry, and you know that. :P Very lyrical poetry, and maybe just space it out ...

Heya Sista ;) Nice poem. :) But wait, :O you're faced with the fight, Should be: you've been faced with the fight, Just a little nitpick :P Also what that ...

WOW!! That was one of the best poems I have EVER read on this! Seriously, unfreakingbelievable! You have so much talent! I loved the first two or three lines =] ...

That was brilliant! Definitly my favourite chapter so far. Awh I love Sonny =] It's a pitty he isn't real. I like how you developed the whole Harriet and Sonny ...

Awh this is the cutest poem ever! You're little sister seems like a smart kid :D I loved this, it was so simple and true. Well done! I don't have ...

Ohh things are really getting interesting now ;) This chapter was good, I just want to be able to flip a page open right now and read more. Seriously, more, ...

Awh I loved this chapter! =] I am seriously happy about the Harriet/Sonny moment. :D I like her and Aiden too though, haha. I thought it would be good if ...

Fabulous chapter! Harriet's character is building more and more. I feel like this chapter really digs into her driven, passionate side for dancing. She cares about it so much, its ...