Saga97

I found this rather interesting, I understand the feeling the poem portrays. Still I find it might be missing something, like you missed some punctuations, not sure if I said ...

This was great, I have always been a fan of poems or just things that leave me contemplating! Your punctuation and rhyming is right on the spot. Actually I feel ...

Risen from abuse Sprouted from neglect Strengthened by pain Blossomed by fear. Then a miracle of light to strip clean the darkest of denials and gently kissed her wounded spirit. ...

I liked it, I see that you probably put a lot of effort into this poem. I'm not sure of how poetry is taught where you're from but in Iceland ...

I like it, I think perfection is in the eye of the beholder! Still I see no faults in this except this. "Imean, howdo you be perfect?" I mean and ...

Okay, this is very confusing! Is this the first chapter or have you posted before? Make the chapters longer and since this is in Novels you should mark it with ...

I found this very interesting and fun to read. You used the words very well and kept the rhythm of the poem flowing. This I must say was really good!

This is very good, at first though I didn't understand but when I read it more thoroughly I get it. I find it kind of disturbing in many ways like ...

Well well Blues i wouldn't have known this was your first poem hadn't you told me! You have done a very good job, keep going poetry is something you are ...

I think that this is a good poem, the one that makes you think. Calibrator Aligator fits more i think atleast I'm new here to, but if i was any ...