Sae

This is rather short- nearly too short for a proper review. I agree with the previous poster. You could elaborate on it more... It does have potential, none-the-less. :D

This poem has some nice wording and flow in it. I liked how the verses sound clear. I must admit, like Velvet.whispers, I did not quite understand this poem, as ...

Jeans, t-shirt, Try a phrase that draws you in to the poem some more. normal appearance, but hurting inside, waiting for life to turn around, but it never seems to ...

Okay, I personally didn't really like the Twilight series, but I will review this as if I liked Twilight a lot. So... somehow, you managed to sound nearly exactly like ...

Okay, I'm going to try to review... I found that this story had an intriguing story-line, and it captured my attention. It was rather descriptive, and overall was pretty good. ...