Rydia

Sort of. I have an edited version of the first stanza but hadn't got much further than that. And it still needs tweaking XD

The cover art sandcastle made me smile so much, I love this! *snuggles*

Thanks everyone! Elinor: You're right, it's much too short to say everything I wanted to so it's all ended up making little sense. I'll work on adding some more stanzas, ...

*Moved to Fantasy Fiction* There you go ^^

Thanks for the help Jas! I love your suggestions for making it more colloquial, that's perfect. I knew there was something I didn't like about this XD

Thank you! My mum doesn't like puppets either lol. I wasn't allowed one as a child but I have one now and it's awesome XD It's a monster puppet so ...

Quetseli: Thank you! I can see how the form might make the poem confusing. My general idea was that the persona is a dealer/ salesman in some form and he ...

Thanks Stella, I made a few quick edits. Possibly it needs extending but I'll look at that another time. I love the myth of Persephone too! I wrote a poem ...

Hi there! I'm back. I'll try to explain the choices for grammar I'm suggesting as I go along... What does it matter if the sun doesn’t shine? What does it ...

Rating changed to 16+ for language.

*Moved to a more appropriate forum*

Well fan-fiction isn't often published and I can only think of one or two examples off the top of my head but I've done a little research for you as ...

Kitty I have to point out the irony here. 'For affect?' That's a grammar slip in itself, hahaha. XD Yeah... my bad, haha. And Arcaus, you should never stop caring ...

Dreams or sleep would be correct =)

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