Rydia

Ah, with lanturne poems I've often seen them strung together like this to form one long poem because they're like the strings of Japanese lanterns you get :)

No problem and in fairness, my suggestion for the bridge wasn't great! Maybe you need a happy middle ground with just one piece of specific imagery so in the example ...

It's a beautiful start and reads better already :) And it makes more sense now I know it's about a relationship, though there's not a strong sense of disharmony between ...

I think it's fine to put personal things into poetry and I do it all the time and that does explain why it seems a little nonsensical to me, but ...

No worries, I'm glad the reviews are helpful and if you have any questions on any of them, feel free to ask! Whenever you're not in a forest is fine ...

No prob and having your own style is good, that just makes a letter even more personal :)

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No problem! If you ever need someone to talk to about it, my inbox is always open :)

No problem! Sorry about the typos, I didn't get a chance to read back through before heading to work this morning but I've fixed those up now so it should ...

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No problem! And yes, both of those parts are good in their own right so you may be able to keep one or both by moving them around. Perhaps you ...

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Ah that makes more sense now, thank you and one for each of the reincarnations sounds like a fun ambition! Best of luck with it!

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That's actually what I thought until I saw the line 'fields of flowers like his or hers' and I wondered if that was a reference to an ex boyfriend who ...