Rydia

Ah, this is more like the Twit I know and love. There's a beautiful, haunting creepiness to this that really gets under your skin. An excellent use of repetition and ...

Twitters! I thought I'd come review you :) Title: So you. It kind of sums you up and the poem too but that aside, it drew my attention and it's ...

Uh you've asked for a review on this but I'm not sure how helpful I can be! I had to look up who Lucy James is and I'm missing all ...

Hey, guess who! Alright so let's see what we have here, I'll write down my thoughts as I read through and then aim to give you some more general advice ...

Hi, here I am with a review as requested :) Let's start with a few specific comments as I read through, shall we? 1. trying desperately not to give myself ...

Hi! I think this is the re-write you wanted me to look at? If not, just let me know and give me a push in the right direction, with a ...

Hi! Sorry its taken me such a long time to get to this, I've been moving house so a lot of crazy stuff has been getting in the way. Let's ...

Hi! Here I am with a review as requested :) I'll start by giving you some specific comments as I read through and then a few more general pieces of ...

Haiiii! Here I am to review, as requested :) I'll start with some specific comments as I read this through and then try to give you a few general thoughts ...

1. Tough! I posted so you have to post, that's how it works missy

Haiiii! Okay so I wanted to review someone from the list of 'followers' as I realised nearly everyone I've reviewed today is someone I don't know! And it's always nice ...

I seem to recall reading this before; in your NaNo thread? Anyway, it's nice to be able to comment this time! I walked with danger on a Saturday night His ...

Hi! First off, I'd like to say I'm liking this layout a lot. It reflects the content of the poem really well and looks almost like a path through the ...

Oh a sonnet! I haven't seen many people attempting sonnets around here so bravo for that because it's a very difficult format to write in! I always flounder when it ...

Hi there Urban! Okay so you have an interesting piece here but it doesn't feel finished? I'm not sure that the poem gives a strong enough image/ emotion/ thought provoking ...