Rydia

Hi, so I didn't feel like reviewing anymore yesterday afterall, bu you get today me instead. I don't think that will make much difference ;) 1. The thing is we ...

First off, allow me to say how much I love the sense of wit here to take a piece like The Raven and turn it back on itself. Lovely idea! ...

Hey there Wraith! Alright so this is interesting, I didn't really like the audio because I found it too flat and there wasn't enough variation in tempt/ tone for my ...

Hey there! Thought this piece was looking rather lonely ^^ Poor old Mosique; [Okay so Mosique= music in another language?] she makes me want to trace pavements. Maybe she would ...

Oh lyrics! Its been a while since I've reviewed lyrics so this should be fun :) The sun is a half slice of lemon glittering, shining in it's own light ...

Hey there, welcome to the site! Alright so this is interesting. I'm not entirely sure a line-by-line review would be useful since it's such a raw first draft so instead ...

Hi lucky! Thought I'd drop by and give you a review :) Title: I think you need a stronger title for this piece. It doesn't really draw the reader in ...

Looks like you could use another review, my dear :) My momma used to hold her cigarettes, a bit like I hold my crayons. Late at night [I love this ...

Haiii, here to review as requested! 1. The title. Okay so I like this title, partly because I'm a little crazy about magpies and this tells me the story is ...

Hey there! Okay so I'm going to start with some specific comments as I read through and then try to give you more genral advice toward the end! 1. Title: ...

Hey there! I'm going to start with specific comments as I read through and then try to give you a bit of an overview at the end. 1. I like ...

Hi! I've read this before, though I don't know if I saw it heree but then didn't have time to review or saw it on your NaPo? Either way, here ...

Here I am, as requested! :) A few specific comments as I read through first: 1. So many questions! You don't want to start by throwing so many questions at ...

There should be a 'Pengu has posted a poem!' notification just for me. Title: Lots of lovely connotations here that have me questioning if the 'we' is you and Australia ...

Haiii! I'm just going to jump right in here because there's something I want to comment on already: Here's the story, of two young folks [This doesn't quite have the ...