Rydia

Hello! 1. The title= love. I haven't read the poem so I can't tell you if it's true yet but I love it and somewhat hope it's not! 2. If ...

Hello! So I was unsure when I read the title of this as I thought it was very cliche, but I clicked through on a whim and your unusual form ...

Hi Audy! 1. The title is intriguing and that's 80% of the reason I'm here, the other 20% being I love you. 2. I think the first line is awkward ...

Hello! 1. The first stanza feels a little fragmented which sometimes works well in poetry, but it doesn't give a strong sense of voice and the words aren't unusual or ...

I'm technically not accepting review requests in my WRFF thread but since we're on the same team I suppose I can make an exception! Specifics 1. Everybody is crowded around ...

Hello! Just a heads up first that I haven't read the other parts so I'm reviewing this without any knowledge of what happens etc. so take what I say with ...

Hello! Just a heads up first that I haven't read the other chapters so I'm reiewing this by chapter and not novel. With that said, let's take a look... Specifics ...

Hello again! Specifics 1. Title: I really like the title. It's simple but intriguing and it says what it is, but also has you wondering what more there is to ...

Hello dear! I don't think I need to explain why I'm here, but the short of the matter is that Santa can't make it so you've got me instead ;) ...

Hello again! I would start by lecturing you on the need to post more recent stuff, except that I like this piece so I'm glad I've had the opportunity to ...

Hi Shino! So you probably know why I'm here but you are going to sit down and listen to the story anyway because I've gotten fond of telling it. So, ...

Hi Sapphire! I chose this one to review as the title interested me :) Here are my thoughts! 1. As silent as an ant, As far as first lines go, ...

Hi Zeph! I'm here for your second review :) Specifics 1. Today we're going to talk about sentence structure. Your first paragraph has a lot of really short or short-medium ...

Hello! So recently, you signed up for the Secret Santa event, but Santa didn't quite make it to your house in time for Christmas in July so he asked if ...

Oh look what I found! And there you said you didn't like Villanelles ;) Specifics 1. fix your eyes in a constant stare. I'd lose the 'a' in this line ...