Rydia

Thought I'd try another chapter :) Specifics 1. Again, more description in the first paragraph please, especially since you've switched to one of the other groups between this part and ...

Hullo fellow reviewer! Thought I'd check this out. Now please note I've not read any earlier chapters so if I say something which you think you've already covered, please ignore. ...

Hi Kanome! I think this is a really nice theme for a poem but I've got a few comments on how you might improve a few things: 1. Title: This ...

Hola! I've not read the previous chapters, so if I question anything which you feel you've covered in an earlier part, please feel free to ignore me. 1. There's a ...

Hullo! I thought maybe I'd review another chapter - hope you're having a fun review day. I'll make some specific comments as I read through and then give you overall ...

Hola! I'm not sure if I've reviewed chapters of this before so just presume I haven't and if I question anything which you feel you've covered in an earlier chapter, ...

Hello dear! I'm not sure if I've reviewed this before but the title seems familiar. Anyway, I'll be making a few specific comments as I read through and if you ...

Hello! I'm going to start with a few specific things I've noticed while reading and then I'll aim to give you some overall tips at the end. 1. The first ...

Hello! Since Widdershins has given you a really nice review on rhythm, I thought I'd follow it up with a small example of how to put that into practice. I'm ...

Hello! So overall I liked this, but I think your ending was stronger than your start so I'm going to try to point out a few things you may be ...

Hullo! So this is pretty catchy and you've stuck to the parody tune pretty well. I don't agree with your opinion of Moffat because I personally loved his storylines, but ...

Hello! I'm going to start with a few specifics and then try to give my overall thoughts at the end: 1. The first stanza is very prosey and I might ...

Heya! A few specific comments first and please ignore me if you think you've answered any of my questions in an earlier chapter. 1. Mina didn’t share Falyn’s need for ...

Hi, I'll leave some line-by-line comments first and then try to summarise my thoughts at the end. Specifics They left me all alone in here, Without even saying goodbye. What ...

Hullo! I've not read the earlier parts so if I say something you've already covered, please feel free to ignore. Specifics 1. I woke the next morning in an infinite ...