Rydia

Hi! Just a quick review on this one: She sat with lips firmly shut, I think it would be nicer to have a simile here because 'firmly shut' is a ...

Hullo, thought I'd take a look at this. Specifics 1. I like the first three lines of this but found the next three a bit too clunky: as though hoping ...

I wake up to the dream catcher on my wall every morning so the title caught my attention and I like that you used it metaphorically. Specifics 1. I'm not ...

Hey there! So I'm filling my house up with plants at the moment and when I saw the title, I decided this was definitely today's review. Specifics 1. I'd actually ...

Hey there Strange! So it's been a while since I've read a poem all the way through before starting my review and that's a good sign, I promise. There are ...

Hello! I thought I'd take a look at this one as the title caught my attention. Specifics 1. I'd generally say to avoid using dialogue tags in a poem because ...

One more review and then I think I'll get some rest! :) Specifics 1. “Is that you, Ria? Are you alright?” Lindon’s voice echoes in the small tunnel, amplifying the ...

Hullo again! Thought I'd take a look at another chapter since you have a lot in the Green Room. Specifics 1. There's a lot of info dumping at the start ...

Hi! Time for another chapter:) Specifics 1. I think when starting a new chapter, it's often nice to have a line or two of setting description or to go for ...

I wonder how many chapters I've missed this time! I'm really going to have to back-track at some point and fill in the gaps but for now it's review day ...

Ah this is a nice little poem, though I wonder if you shouldn't give us the answer at the end. I expect it's moon but I don't think anything would ...

Haiiii Specifics 1. When Jacqueline arrived back at the house, she found Adele seated, looking at her copy of Thus Spoke Zarathustra in the sitting room. Adele looked up as ...

Hi there! I thought I'd squeeze a review in before bedtime :) Specifics 1. Adding commas will make this easier to read as they tell your reader where to pause ...

I'm going to put it out there right away that I don't know what this is a fan-fic of so I'm coming to this from the view point of someone ...

Hey there, just a few quick observations on this: Specifics 1. As Ashley says, the title doesn't do this poem justice and could be more interesting. I'm not sure if ...