Rydia

Hello, thought I'd take a look at this since it's in the Green Room... Specifics 1. Be careful of starting a chapter in the middle of a conversation. It starts ...

Hullo! Thought I'd take a look at this since it's the oldest work in the Green Room and deserves a review! Specifics 1. I'm not sure abut the phrase 'her ...

The fact that you can look back at photos and see the difference between then and now and acknowledge that you're not that size any more and are probably what ...

Hello! So I'm reviewing the chapter ones while I decide which novel to pick up and ths one's next :) Specifics 1. The opening sentence is a bit awkward because ...

Prose poetry! I don't think I've read one of these since my experimental writing classes but thought I'd take a look :) Specifics 1. I love the internal rhymes and ...

Okay this is not what I was expecting xD I was going to come here and say that I don't normally like Haikus but I'm willing to give it a ...

Howdy! I'm reviewing all the chapter ones while I'm choosing which novel to pick up so here goes... Specifics 1. I know that sounds morbid, but I really can’t help ...

Hello! So while deciding which novel to take up, I'm reviewing the chapter ones 'cos it would be weird to read something and not review. Specifics 1. I feel like ...

Hello! So I figure while I'm reading the chapters to decide which novel to review, I may as well review chapter one anyway! Specifics 1. The first line isn't particularly ...

I'm going to review this before you can take it down then ;) Specifics 1. I want to turn some of your lines around. I hope you'll forgive me for ...

Hello again! Specifics 1. I don't think you need to have the speaker think of what her sister looks like in her head - it feels repetitive when she then ...

Thought I'd take a look at this :) Specifics 1. Very nice, subtle start. You're not telling the reader what's happened so much as having the narrator react to the ...

Hello! I'm very fond of mythical poetry and Echo was always a particular favourite of mine. I always thought her story was one of the most melancholic. Specifics 1. I ...

Okay so I love Doctor Who and I'm a bit fan of cultural party, especially when it doesn't take itself too seriously! Specifics 1. The first two lines are a ...

I'm a bit bored of poetry at the moment so I thought I'd try some prose instead... Specifics 1. I think the introduction is too standard - the description of ...