Rydia

Hi! I thought I'd pop by for a review :) Specifics 1. a sanctuary is I think this might be more powerful as 'My sanctuary is' because it would introduce ...

Hi! I'm a big fan of snow so this wasn't a hard choice when looking for the next thing to read :) Specifics 1. It never snowed in her town, ...

Hi, welcome to the site, I hope you're finding your way around okay! 1. I've not written a lot of micro prose but I think the really key thing is ...

Hi there, thought I'd take a look at this! Specifics 1. As heart beats I think this should be heartbeats because you're talking about them specifically rather than saying 'a ...

Hi, first off, welcome to the site! I hope you're enjoying it here so far :) Specifics 1. I’ve always profoundly enjoyed literature since I was five years of age. ...

Hi there, thought I'd dip my foot back into poetry reviews! I think you've got some good ideas here but there's a big disconnect between some of the lines/ themes ...

Hey there, buddy! Hope you're having a good weekend :) Specifics 1. I think you've got a strong theme - poems about nature will always go down well with me ...

Hi! Thought I'd stop by for a review :) Specifics 1. Rather than start the chapter with 'a few days later' always add context to your first few sentences. I'm ...

Hi, welcome to the site and thanks for sharing your poem with us! Specifics 1. I think brief poems can work but the shorter the poem, the more meaningful you ...

Hi there! Specifics 1. I think on the one side this poem has a nice simplicity but at the same time, I feel that because it's so short you have ...

Hullo! Specifics 1. I think you have some very short lines at the start and then very long lines at the end so the structure needs some tidying up. You ...

So I'm tired which means tonight's review is a poem and oh, hello poem :) 1. Strong title - it tells us this is going to be about someone leaving ...

Hello dear! You've written too many reviews for this to be allowed to stay in the green room for any length of time ;) Specifics 1. She carried her duffel ...

I don't think I'm going to have many suggestions here as it seems pretty strong after a quick read through, but maybe a second reading will give me a chance ...

Shape poems can be really tricky to master since you've got to balance the visual appeal of the poem with your choice of words so first off, well done for ...