Rurouni

-shrug- in all honestly I didn't laugh. Sometimes a one liner isn't the joke that cracks the person up.

Maybe you could share your fight with gravity? How did you fight against it, etc?

This was beautiful.

Grammar in poetry is allowed to be thrown out the window... It's poetry.

Actually, a quick tip, in poetry ALL grammar rules are allowed to go OUT the window. Thanks though!

Have you ever read "The Giver" because there was something like this in there and wow. I like this poem. Though we don't always turn our eyes away from those ...

And here I thought you were a google bot.

Dude, that 's rude DX. I think this was cool!

I found this mocking...

That's what I call em!

Strangle loves, this made me smile. -just don't be a terrorist, k?- *clicks like*

Actually, poetry doesn't have to have a rhythm or rhyme, there is such thing as Free Verse which has none of the above.

I see what you did there.

I will say, you had me there, but I got it! Haha! -cough-atleastithinkidid-cough-

You did go a bit overboard Zhia. And I agree with Purple. There are a lot of hidden messages in poetry, you have to read (often) in between the lines ...