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Vey well written. But if forever was a day, I don't want to love you that way. I'll love you 'til the day I die, and live with you my ...

Love this... It has no flaws... I love the way you describe the life of the grim reaper. I bet he thought I would find the unexpected music he zapped ...

Wow... awsome... one mere review cant express how good this is. But (yes there is a but), there are some mistakes. Firstly “Okay. But I swear he said how kind. ...

Hi, I'll just let you know that i havent reat the other Avalors, but I will get round to them as soon as I can. Anyway, I found this really ...

wow.... *speechless*. I never was one for poetry but this is something else :O. Still it must be reviewed and so I begin (keep in mind that whatever mistakes are ...

Hi Awaken, Befor I crit I just want to let you know that I am not the worlds greatist speller, so I have no idea wether you spelt stuff well ...

Wow very nice (if a little scary) The who thing kept me hooked until the end despite the few mistakes that managed to slip in as they always seem to ...

An interesting beginning, but I'd advise you to flesh out the characters a bit... Still i like the way you flit from on persons point of view to the next ...

It’s a good poem on the whole; however I think there are a couple of things that need changing: First of all the way the sentences have no space between ...

Well written on the whole. I don't know about the rest of the people who have read this, but I think that if you change the refernce to the baby ...