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Yay! Im glad you liked it. And thanks I knew something was missing her but I couldn't think of what it was so, thanks!!!! :D

Okay, I'll put a prologue but I'm not sure where. Maybe at the beginning of the chapter? I was trying to make it like a flash back but I guess ...

Hey, thanks this is greatly appreciated!

Okay, thank you I will see what I can do to make this better.

Okay, cool idea! Thanks don't forget to click "like".

It's going to be longer. It's a part of a story but I guess I could put it with sort stories. Oh, and thanks for the grammar correction. I was ...

Okay, I read your review over again and I added some more feeling and description accordingly. I hope it satisfies you, if not please tell me where you think there ...

Yay! Im so glad. ^^

Thanks, this does have a lot of incorrect spelling and such I will make this correct ASAP because I know how annoying it is to read something that's unclear. I ...

Thanks @fantasydragon01!

It was getting very complicated. I couldn't keep up with three character development at a time

Thanks @SharraeWilson, these reviews are very helpful. Don't forget to "like" it if you enjoyed this chapter. :D

The chapters match up now feel free to review!

Thank you so much! I am glad you enjoyed reading my thoughts. ;)