RubyRed

Haha it's fine I just point out anything that's a grammatical error.

Ah, okay. Well keep writing you've got a great story here.

You're welcome! Glad I could help!

Okay cool!

That's fine as long as it isn't very graphic. xD

Thank you. (:

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Of course not! (:

I'm glad I was helpful. I'm not trying to throw any shade your way. I'm just not into stuff like this.

Thanks for your review. It's greatly appreciated. I really don't know what to do about how "rushed" it is. I tried adding some more description as to where they were ...

Thanks for the review! :D

You're very welcome.

:D

Also, don't forget to click 'like'.

Thanks so much! :D Here's the definition for sappy: sappy: excessively sentimental; mawkish sentimental: of or prompted by feelings of sadness or nostalgia