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You're welcome. I'm glad I could help. :D

Thanks don't forget to click the "like" button. :D

Okay. Oh and can we forget about my "petty revenge"? I was having a bad day. :(

It just looked sloppy because in one line it'll be very long and then you'll have a really short one. As for the capitalization, I thought it was here: We ...

I don't think I'll be lengthening this piece.

Eh, whatever.

No, that's fine I didn't think you meant it that way.

She was being a hypocrite.

I think it's funny how you all question whether it's a true story. xD

You reviewed it while I was changing it. xD

Okay. I wont bring up the Oxford comma again then.

Well, I thought you should extend the conversation between Norah and Emma in the first chapter. For this one I thought you should have Emma and her sister talk more. ...

Thanks once again. Don't forget to click the like button. :)

Yeah, thanks for clearing those things up for me. xD

Thanks for your review. I added a description of Zeight because someone asked for one but I guess I should take it out. Anyway, the next chapter is up if ...