RubyRed

Thanks you have very valid points I'll keep in mind when writing my first chapter! Would you like me to tag you when the first chapter is up?

Thanks, Shey! I'm glad you want to stick around. Jill's backstory and what not will be included, for the most part, in the first chapter. However, there is mystery involved ...

Love this

Ah I like that a lot better! :D

Ah kay XD I brainstorm and forget the reader doesn't know what's inside my head as well. :3 You're good and hey! Tag me when the next parts out I ...

Miracle whip is like the retarded fat cousin of mayo XD

Also, I'm really sorry about your grandpa. My grandpa also passed away recently.

Well no I knew it was outside but the two parts I pointed out sounded a bit like it was changed. Also I don't think they'd be confused with the ...

Oh okay. I've never seen anyone use ~ before. And I think I realized the emphasis after I posted the review XD And when I said use won't instead of ...

Oh just use the @ sign before my name when you make the announcement on your wall :)

I'm glad it helped! Tag me when you put up the next chapter :)

How did you know?! I've gone through so many flippin name changes XD lol And no problem really! ;)

Oh okay then keep "fucking" I like it XD Also clever ideas with the i's And no problem on the review. I'm glad to know it helped :)

OHHHH lol okay I get it! XD sorry bout that... yeah... I have no idea how you came up with something so clever and original like this. I really did ...

Hahahahahaha, Rossi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD