RubyRed

Okay, your choice to write that way then. :D I just think it's basic modern writing (which isn't very exciting). For the chapter: the plot isn't very clear. She just ...

I guess my thoughts are kind of brief. Maybe I can elaborate more in the future. Thanks for the feed back! And don't forget to click the like button. :P

Thanks again.

Thank you for your review. I wrote a free verse poem not too long ago and no one took a look at it for me so I decided to stick ...

Thanks, and don't forget to click the "like" button or star up top. :D

I'd be blue. Nice poem btw.

Thanks. You have very valid points. Don't forget to click the like button.

Ah, I should do the same.

Thanks, that means a lot.

Thank you so much.

Gotcha. ;) Don't forget to click the "like" button. xD

Thanks so much for the feed back and don't forget to click the "like" button! Also, may I ask where my capitalization is incorrect? And what you mean by fullstop?

Thank you. That means a lot to me. Don't forget to click the star or "like" button up top. (:

Thanks again. Don't forget to click the "like" button up top. :)

Thanks! Don't forget to click the "like" button up top. :)