RubyRed

Aly I agree with you on that. Well said.

OMG this is so ducking HILARIOUS! Why isn't THIS in the Literary Spotlight? Lol made my night! Your dad is funny. And HAHAHAHA, and good night. And keep writing cause ...

Aww thanks! So glad you enjoyed it! Don't forget to leave a like (:

It's later. XD

Haha no problem :)

Haha whats funny is when you were reviewing I took Ink's advice and change a few things. I agree with you on the rhyme scheme prob though. :) Don't forget ...

I'm glad you liked it! I'll see what I can do about the rhyme scheme. Thanks for your review and don't forget to leave a like if you enjoyed it! ...

Yes, you are right about the abrupt stops in flow, but like I said I wrote this a long time ago so that's probably why there is that problem. :) ...

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it! Don't forget to leave a like up top (:

This isn't a poem more like a short. ;)

And I must have overlooked the fact that "spluttering" is indeed a word. My mistake sorry. :)

Hahaha, well I didn't mean to offend you. And yes I've had alcohol before it didn't give me the runs but I guess it can happen. And I didn't say ...

Sure. :)

Don't feel responsible for my reaction. It was going to happen sooner or later. I wish you well too.

Wow, this was deep. :( It made me sad, but I liked it. I find it very puzzling that I can relate to all this. I really haven't been feeling ...