Rubric

Howdy, this is in response to your request for a review, please let me know if this is helpful, and feel free to ask for specific feed-back in the future. ...

"which ended in a full body collision with one of the torn bar stools" This reads as if the barrel ended up in a full body collision: whereas it should ...

“You’re the first person who didn’t laugh . . . when I told them.” Take England as an example: they didn’t start anything like a public education system until well ...

Howdy, sorry it took me so long to get to your review. It's quite a long pice and took me some time to get through. I usually do an itemised ...

Howdy. First impression: wow. I enjoy this type of piece, where a narrative is made characterful without being overly resistant to a reader. You gave us enough to create a ...

Howdy again. Once again the general comments are intermingled with particular critiques. I dwell a little on worldbuilding, social-structure and narrative style. Hope this proves helpful. "by the girl

Howdy again. Interspersed with my nitpicking, I have a bit of a discussion on your worldbuilding. I’ll be very interested to see how you handle clerical magic in particular. If ...

Good afternoon. I will begin with specific remarks, and move toward the general. Rest assured that I was greatly impressed with your overall style and particularly the shift in sympathy ...

I quite enjoyed this piece, though in reality it is two, rather than one. the initial letter is great, because it combines exposition witha tangible characterisation on the part of ...

Howdy, I'll jump right it. It's a short piece, but you manage to create some strong characterisation of Stephen, and hint at future plot developments. The biggest sell is the ...

Howdy. First of all, I couldn't find Part 1, so my review will be based solely on what I've read here. Sorry if that leads to any misconceptions on my ...

Howdy, I'm Rubric and I'll be doing a run down of your piece. My overall impression is that I like this as backstory: it explains how the woman becomes a ...

I love this. You capture the tension between characters caught in an impossible situation, and do it very well. I must say, it's an incredibly intimidating subject to write about, ...

I tend not to critique poetry as I'm less than a dab hand at it, but I do love the amount of historical references built into it. It's haunting. Moving ...

Ignore that first post, it's been a while since I've done a review and I was disheartened by the lack of tools at my disposal. I'll begin with my general ...