RoyalHighness

Whoops, that was supposed to be a review. Take two! RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, so this was okay. I like the overarching concept. The idea of human resilience ...

*standing ovation* *applause* *cheering* RoyalHighness has arrived to review! The choppiness is a little distracting, and I don't love that it doesn't rhyme, but I love the concept. This would ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! My first impression of this spectacular piece was "haunting," because that's what it is! I really like this! But there are a few things we ...

YES YES YES RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I love what this poem is about because it's EXACTLY HOW I FEEL okay calm. I like the first stanza, no complaints. ...

Hey, Auxii! RoyalHighness here to review! Alright, so this is a really interesting idea, and pretty well-written. There are a few things you need to clear up, but other than ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Alright, so this is good. I've never really been into fan fiction, but this is good. As far as grammar and punctuation is concerned, you've ...

RoyalHighness here to review! The lines that end in "harder and harder to forgive," are a little choppy. They're a little out of place. And the repetition is kind of ...

*CRIES FOREVER* Okay calm. RoyalHighness has arrived to review. Overall, this is fantastic. But I like to start with what you need to fix, so. First stanza, third line was ...

RoyalHighness here to review! Hmm. Overall, I'd say this was okay. The problem I have is that you used one too many cliches. The sentence "I could not see him ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, overall this was beautiful. But let's talk about the parts I didn't love before we talk about the parts that I ABSOLUTELY DID okay ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Okay, this contains two of my biggest pet peeves: one, run-on sentences; two, no paragraph breaks when a person talks. You've got to break up ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Yes, it's a tad rough but you don't give yourself enough credit. I'll be gentle but honest. From the beginning, you had me hooked. Great ...

I LOVE THIS A LOT OKAY okay, calm. RoyalHighness has arrived to review. Okay, let's take it from the beginning. Being a hipster myself, the title attracted me first. Great ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! I like this limerick! I'm particularly a lover of limericks, so this was such a treat for me. I don't get the whole name thing, ...

RoyalHighness has arrived to review! Let's see. I'm feeling pretty lukewarm about this poem. When it comes to the subject, I'm pretty clueless myself, but there are a few poem-y ...