RoxieRain

This is really good writing and I understand where you are trying to go with this but it personally doesn't quite make sense. It may be just me and this ...

We all have self doubt and completely understand, but you have no reason to your writing is amazing. And you can tell that this writing is truly from your heart ...

I love that description of writers block because it is so true. My favorite part is the end "Or is it truly just a dream to be a leaf cast ...

I love the part where you said your body was late to the party when your nose broke it was a great description without being gross. Being the nerd that ...

I love that you make vocab so fun and enjoying, I never thought of doing that with my vocabulary words. It would also definitely help the learning process and just ...

I love the free form of this poem. The structure really emphasizes the feeling and emotion you hold for this topic. It is also very deep and holds a lot ...

I love this poem. It starts off cute and adorable. Then you have mosquitoes, and gooey burritos. I thought it was great and it definitely made me laugh. The title ...

I love how he gave her the ring. It was so sweet, but then again it doesn't help that I am a sap for a good romance. Your descriptions were ...

You are right this has great potential. I love the way you described things, they created a perfect movie in my head. You had some spelling and grammatical errors but ...

The name of this poem it a really good attention hook. This is really good poetry! I thought it was fun how you reworded the fears and then later addressed ...

This was very interesting and I was constantly intrigued while reading it. You had great descriptions. I also liked how your adjectives weren't unique but the way in which you ...