RowenaLynn

Hey! Thanks again for reviewing my work... Ok. So. I don't think that I have much to say about what to fix in this... I loved the repetition with the ...

Hey! Back for another review. I don't think that I mentioned this before, but I really enjoyed that they had the right to choose to be part of the magical ...

Hey! RowenaLynn here for a review... I wanted to say that I like the poem! You use similar rhymes throughout the poem, and that's different and cool. That being said, ...

Hey, this is an cool short story. It's relatable to most people and that is something that can really make stories great. I think that in the part "As the ...

This is really cool! I love the twin sister thing too! (I've got a twin so maybe I'm a bit biased... :)) Maybe put some more reaction right away or ...

Heyo! This is a really cool story, its really interesting and engaging(I will read more!). One thing to improve would be some of the wording and a little bit of ...

Hey! This is a cool beginning of a story! 1 thing that cold be edited is some of the grammar... not that I'm the greatest at that, but there are ...

Hello! This is really cool! I always feel that rhyming is cool in poetry when it's done right (and you did it well-Just be careful about that in the future:)). ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this! your word choice kept me engaged the whole time. By the end, I really felt invested in the story and I wanted to know more. ...