RoseTulipLily

Greetings! Glad to see another chapter from you. Now let's get right into the review! 'It was a long and fitful night for Zoltar.' Is the correct way to say ...

Greetings! Let's get right into the review! 'I never liked the word "hero". The stereotypical man in shining armor saving a helpless town from utter destruction by a rampant beast ...

Hello! Sorry not reviewing the previous chapters, but I didn't think there was anything new I could add that others already hadn't so I moved onto the next part of ...

Hello and happy review day! So this was short, but still a good set up for the story. I am not sure how to regarding Caleb and Loretta as characters ...

Greetings again! So this was an interesting control to the previous first half of the last chapter. Whereas when we met Agrona, there was action, violence, and urgency, the exact ...

Hello again! So after the action packed previous part of this story, the more quiet yet tense continuation here was a welcome addition. The escape, however, seemed kinda rushed and ...

Hello and happy review day! For starters, I enjoyed the way you started the story by getting straight to the point. I certainly felt Argonauts felt while he was fighting ...

Greetings once again for the forth time! I would not call this your weakest chapter at all. I think that would better describe the first one since you were just ...

Hello! I'm back again! I like the way this chapter started with the Immortal treating Avery and Reinhard lik soldier at the starting of training. I felt a mixture of ...

Hello! Happy review day! So I couldn't really find much to critique for this chapter. I liked the way you set up the scene and I couldn't help but chuckle ...

Greetings! And happy Review Day! I apologize in advance if I ever repeat anything anyone else said in previous review or come across as nitpicky to you. With that being ...

Greetings and happy review day! 'The yellow and faded brown tangles of grass swayed back and forth to the wind's gusty rhythm.' Is the correct way to say this. 'The ...

Hello for the fourth time now! I'm glad that we were able to delve a bit more into Zoltar's mind after the previous chapters, especially with his opinion of Hisser's ...

Greetings for the third time now! Like the other chapters, this was quite short but pleasant to read nonetheless. You do a decent job of establishing the situation for our ...

Hello again! I'm glad you go straight to the point with establishing the urgency of the situation and what needs to be done for the characters to survive. The scene ...